Cheesecake Saga 1-1

posted January 14th, 2009, 10:14 pm


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January 14th, 2009, 10:17 pm

faceofdoomness

...and so the Great Cheesecake Saga begins with the continuation of the previous strips involving the thief of the cheesecake and the guy that really wanted know who stole his cheesecake. (I should really give them names.)

Also this marks the first series of strips of chinchilatron that is a story arc! :O (Disregard the crappiness of the fourth panel. >_< )

I dunno if each of the pages should be colored but so far I like coloring them. :{B

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January 14th, 2009, 11:10 pm

Sorrows Neptune

it's called a Story arc

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January 14th, 2009, 11:14 pm

faceofdoomness

I know. I just like to type in a lot of words for some reason but to take your advice, I edited my first post.

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January 15th, 2009, 2:13 am

Contemplating

Oh god, the hills have eyes! D:

I like cheesecake man's squiggle dance and hat. He's so joyful. You should keep it in color, it would be half the awesome if it wasn't. :(

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January 15th, 2009, 9:03 am

Prank

The hills besides having eyes, look edible with a very warm coloring that certainly looks like the place where the Cheesecake Thief would have his pre-eating the cheesecake dance ritual. I especially enjoy the foreshadowing quickly rising to a climax beginning with a strangers silhouette and ending a a amazingly well drawn expression of hate and revenge and a accompanying aura, that guy's going to get mighty ugly wrinkles D:>

Lovely shocked expression in the 4th panel, you may hate your pen but you mix it in so well with the coloring, it's truly envious.

And keep the characters names long, I think it's a nice theme.

Things do not look well for the cheesecake thief :U Also keep the coloring.

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January 15th, 2009, 7:14 pm

faceofdoomness

Well then, that settles is. The entirety of the Cheesecake saga shall be completely colored in! :{D

@Contemplating: Indeed them hills have eyes. Pretty sketchy looking eyes too.

@Prank: Yes, the stranger approaches the Cheesecake Thief with a vendetta and a sense of anger as intense as a thousand suns. Cheesecake Thief's gonna be in for a really rough time. D:>

Your comment, it fills me yet again with warmth and fuzziness. I love it when someone notices all of the details that I put into my work. :{D

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